(Message sent via IEEE Standards webmail) ----------------------------------------- Commenter = Marek Hajduczenia Affiliation = Bright House Networks SenderEmail = marek.hajduczenia@mybrighthouse.com SenderPhone = +1-813-465-0669 StandardRev = IEEE Std 1904.1-Conformance03-2014 SubclauseNumber = 7.9.4.3 Page = 88 Rationale = Description of TLV_Serial sub-attributes is not complete - sOnuModelExt is missing in the enumeration. ProposedChange = Change eOAMPDU (see 6.1.2 and 6.3.1), where sVendorId, sOnuModel, sOnuId, sVersionHw, and sVersionSw are sub-attributes defined in IEEE Std 1904.1, 14.2.2.1. to read eOAMPDU (see 6.1.2 and 6.3.1), where sVendorId, sOnuModel, sOnuId, sVersionHw, sVersionSw, and sOnuModelExt are sub-attributes defined in IEEE Std 1904.1, 14.2.2.1 Similar change also on page 89 (step 3.3), page 90 (step 2.2), and page 92 (step 2.5) Impact = None. The change is purely editorial ----------------------------------------- (End of IEEE Standards webmail message)